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新疆35选7的90期开奖号:問題與分析英語畢業論文“致謝”寫作時存在的問題

論文編號:lw201007121434398100 所屬欄目:英語畢業論文 發布日期:2018年01月15日 論文作者:無憂論文網
摘要:針對英語專業畢業論文“致謝”中存在的對象不明、文體混亂、內容牽強等問題,分析得出其原因主要是學生對“致謝”的寫作要領不知,提出了相應的解決對策,并通過“致謝”實例加以佐證。英語專業畢業論文( thesis)一般被視為該專業學生所寫的第一篇正規學術性論文,論文寫作中的每個部分對該專業學生來說都是十分重要的,當然,“致謝”( acknowledgements)也不例外。學術性論文中的“致謝”是指作者以書面形式對幫助鼓勵過自己完成論文的人所表示的謝意,它是論文的有機組成部分,一般置于題名頁( title page)之后,獨立成篇、單另成頁?!爸灤弧輩喚瞿芊從陳畚牡男醋鞅塵凹白髡哐醯難轄魈群偷賴?而且在一定程度上還能反映作者的學術水平。然而在指導學生論文寫作的過程中,筆者發現,不少學生難于寫好“致謝”。
一、問題與分析學生論文“致謝”寫作時存在的問題主要表現在以下三個方面。
1. 對象不明。例如:I am grateful to my parents, without their support, I cannotfinish my thesis. I am also thankful to all my classmates andteachers, without their encouragement, I cannot get down to writ2ing the thesis. And finally Iwant to thank the Foreign LanguagesDepartment of XXX University for p rovidingme a computer to typeand p rint outmy thesis.從對象分析,該“致謝”盡管提到了父母、同學和老師,但排名先后順序不當,而對導師( supervisor)的指導卻只字不提??蠢?學生還不清楚“致謝”的主要對象應該是誰。
2. 文體混亂。例如:Itwas really a laborious task to accomp lish my thesis. Manypeop le gave me support and help in the p rocess of writing the pa2per. I’d like first to give my gratitude to my dear teacher, Prof.XXX who generously gave me her kind help and instructions dur2ing the whole p rocess ofmy paper - writing. Then I’d like to givemy many thanks to my classmateswho helpedme a lotwith my in2formation collecting and paper - polishing.從文體上分析,此“致謝”混用了正式文體和非正式文體。如laborious, gratitude屬正式文體語言,短語a lot和縮合詞I’d屬非正式文體語言。另外在此用dear teacher來表示“導師”也不當或欠妥??杉形湊莆鍘爸灤弧斃醋韉奈奶?。
3. 內容牽強。例如:Iwould like to thank my supervisor, Mrs. XXX who helpedme draw an outline of the thesis and correct my mistakes in thethesis. Also Iwant to thank allmy teachers. I learned a lot fromthem, not only the knowledge but also the working attitude. More2over, I thank my classmates aswell. During the studywe becamegood friends, and spent happy time. And finally I am grateful tomy parents, without their support, I cannot accomp lish my study.從內容來看,本“致謝”除第一句外,其他句子都與撰寫論文無關,這表明論文由無憂論文網www.51lunwen.org整理提供都與完成論文有關,而且具體實在。向導師致謝是因為在“我”論文寫作期間導師提供了很大的學術幫助和不斷的支持。向同學致謝是因為他們花時間跟“我”討論論文中的有關問題并提出了好的意見。向XXX圖書館致謝是因為它給“我”提供了有關論文的所需資料。
三、佐證示例以下“致謝”對象具體、文體正式、格式規范,實事求是,態度誠懇。比較符合西方英語學位論文“致謝”的寫作這一具體要求:“Lauding one’s p rofessors, and humbling one’s own ef2forts are considered inapp rop riate. ”[ 8 ]AcknowledgementsIwould like to exp ressmy heartfelt gratitude to my supervisorProfessor XXX for her encouragement, guidance and advice to methroughout the writing of this thesis.Iwould also like to extend my sincere thanks to ProfessorXXX for his insightful advice on my choice of top ic and his helpfulsuggestions.In addition, Iwould like